On your blog, write a short poem describing how you felt when you first set foot on the moon.
I Was In My Spaceship Heading to the moon And when I got to my destination I hopped out of my spaceship as i was flying and landed straight on the moon when I foot first on the moon I felt surprised because I never knew I would be the first one to put first feet on the moon.
Mōrena Savanah! How are you doing? I just had late breakfast with all my weetabix. It was pretty yummy. What do you eat for breakfast!
ReplyDeleteThank you for your blog post! I really enjoyed reading your poem about visiting the moon. I think you've done really well and used lots of descriptive words that really make me feel like I'm in space with you and your spaceship! Wow, I can almost feel the moon under my feet!
I really like your moon description but I don't think you've written a poem. We can't award you full points if the question hasn't been answered completely. Could you please have another go at the activity? I'm happy to help you if you get stuck - just reply in the comments below! Other than that, ka pia on all your effort!
Keep up the great blogging!
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