Activity:Black
Please write a short story. The story can be about anything that you wish!
On your blog, share your short story. We can’t wait to read it
My Story:Purple
Savanah’ lifelong ambition was to reach the peak and capture the view before the sun rose. she was an experienced climber who had overcome many challenges, battled extreme weather conditions and dedicated his life to training. After hours of feeling like no progress was being made, and with only her trusty head torch for company, Savanah finally noticed a change in the sky. The scene was breathtakingly beautiful. The splinters of light pierced through the clouds like knives, and soft snow covered the peaks like icing on a cupcake. Savanah paused and drew breath as she set up her tripod in the hope of pausing time and framing this precious memory.
Very nice story.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Savanah,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading reading your short story about an experienced climber who was on a hike! It actually sounds like a movie!
You used some incredible descriptive words and even used an amazing simile The splinters of light pierced through the clouds like knives. U=I absolutely loved this! Have you ever been on a hike before? I often go on hikes so I can enjoy the sun and the outdoors!
Keep up the awesome work! Keen to hear back from you :)
Blog you later!
Georgia